Thursday, January 30, 2014

Mallarme Free-write

keeping watch
                        wondering
                                                rolling on
                                                                        shining and pondering
                                               
                                                                                    before finally halting
                                                                                    at some last point sanctifies it


These lines indicate a sort-of break in the rhythm that I noticed in the peace.  I’m not sure whether or not I was influenced by the piece’s nautical theme, but I understood the poem to have a certain “ebb and flow” like that of an ocean.  Here it appears that Mallarme cuts the poem’s momentum short, as if to create an abrupt resolution. The line “before finally halting” quite literally halts the motion of the words across the page.  Where they were falling downwards, echoing the movement that their action-word-laden content, the fifth line puts an abrupt halt to this motion.  Keeping, wondering, rolling, shining and pondering.  These words work in line with one-another, each one building off of the last.  The fifth and sixth line resolve the motion in these words, “sanctifying” the meaning the poem. 

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